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First part of Chapter 00.001. Find the prologue and follow the story on Line Webtoon's Challenge League www.webtoons.com/en/challenge/… 
Manga Studio Ex 5, OpenCanvas 6
Manga Studio Ex 5, OpenCanvas 6
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This is some excellent work! Very impressed by the flow and looking forward to more 
The only thing that struck me as maybe requiring some thought for future pages, is how closely you decide to zoom in on your character. When she is being chased by the darkness and her full body is visible, I felt that maybe shrinking her down a little bit to emphasize the danger of the darkness (or bring more tension) might have been a good call. But that all depends on what you actually intended with the darkness in the first place.
Scale of characters to backdrop is really a more aesthetic fine tuning, but I find it can add some extra layers to meaning in comic works, should you decide to mess with it.
The only thing that struck me as maybe requiring some thought for future pages, is how closely you decide to zoom in on your character. When she is being chased by the darkness and her full body is visible, I felt that maybe shrinking her down a little bit to emphasize the danger of the darkness (or bring more tension) might have been a good call. But that all depends on what you actually intended with the darkness in the first place.
Scale of characters to backdrop is really a more aesthetic fine tuning, but I find it can add some extra layers to meaning in comic works, should you decide to mess with it.